Georgina Rockstar and the Chocolate Factory – by Katherine

Georgina Rockstar and the Chocolate Factory

Georgina Rockstar was really obsessed with her looks and everybody was getting fed up! Georgina would be sitting on her vanity putting white nail polish on her because she wants her nails to be on fleek and then just that Georgina would even put glitter on her nails and she even had to put light blue but just light blue. She also had hair that went al the way to her rib cage Georgina also wore jeans that had patterns on them and the top she wore was a purple top but it was like violet and she had some writing on the shirt that said I am beautiful her hair was brown up the top and going light blonde at the very end tip was so soft like a marshmallow. She also wore leather, black heels that were up to her knees.


Georgina lived in France in the city Paris. She had a two-floor mansion that had all glass windows that reached up the next floor. Near the big, brown door that had a gold knocker that would shine on the sun even before the door there was a nice white porch and beside the door was two glass windows. Georgina’s room was a cream colour it was a huge bed room, in one corner there was a bed that was grey and she even had her own bathroom. Georgina was living with her little brother Joseph and her mother and farther.


Before long, Georgina heard an incredible announcement from the local news broadcast. Willy Wonka had decided to open his glorious, amazing factory to three lucky, happy children if they found a golden ticket hidden within his delicious chocolate bars. If only Georgina could find one. They sprinted down stairs and called for dad.


One day, Georgina came out of her light, brown door and before she left she went to her dad” daddy I really want a golden ticket because everyone keeps talking about it” moaned Georgina. So, Georgina went to the beach to have a swim, so she saw something shining and it was a gold ticket, so she pulled it from under the rock and went back home and waited the next day.


The next day, Georgina revealed that she had obtained one of the sparkly, golden ticket and was on her way to Willy Wonka’s factory.


Seconds later, Georgina arrived at the factory and the crazy, loud crowd bustled with excitement. It wasn’t long before Georgina went through the door and was welcomed warmly by Willy Wonka in the entrance. Gathered around Mr Wonka were the winners of the golden tickets, Veruca Salt (a spiteful, rich child) and Mike Tv who was incredibly rude. Soon after, the group were led through an chocolate door and into the chocolate room.


Soon after, they were all in the chocolate room they could see gob stoppers and they could even see buttercups that looked nice and fresh in the chocolate grass. Georgina could defiantly see a chocolate river flowing down in little waves, but her eyes were more focused on them yummy looking buttercups, so she walked over to them.


The rainbow, round gob stoppers were all placed on the grass, but they were growing on the ground. Georgina could also see a dark, wavy, chocolate water fountain up a head.


“Little girl…” began Mr Wonka, “please stop, its not finished. Every time an Oompa Loompa tries one it turns a bit big that’s what happens. “That’s not going to stop me, I’m good at tasting things so step aside,” replied Georgina.


So, Georgina took her hand and quickly got it. Oh my gosh I got it! Georgina screamed. At that second, she put it in her rosy, red mouth and her shiny teeth started chewing away and then Georgina started to smell good and what did she turn into she was a cupcake.


After their catchy tune, the Oompa Loompas surrounded the group. The parents of Georgina looked shocked, scared at Mr Wonka’s instructions, the Oompa Loompas led the huge, round Georgina and her parent slowly went. Unfortunately, Georgina left the factory without anything to show for her visit. Her vanity had gotten the better of her. From now on she was a little more considerate towards others. So, Georgina stopped being selfish anymore.


Later that day, the nice, pretty girl left the factory through the small, little door courtyard and through the iron gates. Georgina was so flexible that she even did a back flip who can say whether she’ll ever be the same again?

Emily Street and the Chocolate Factory – by Lauris

Once upon on a time, there was a little girl called Emily Street she was so obsessed with how she looked and spent hours combing her hair and applying thick brushes to her pale face. She was really vane and gave mean compliments to everyone she met. She would always where the same lilac dress and fur jacket and long pointy high heels. Everyday Emily would straighten her hair to perfection so that not even a tiny strand was on her tiny head. Her long, sharp nails had a sort of f peach colour on and were very glittery. Emily would try and crave attention from anyone she met. Unfortunately, Emily had no friends because off her attitude and behaviour. Emily would always kick and scream when she didn’t get her way. Her mom and dad didn’t help because they gave her everything she wanted and spoiled her rotten.

Emily lived in America near Hollywood and her house was massive. At the front of the house was an arched, wooden porch covered in honeysuckle and roses. The house was made of stone and it had massive, glass windows at the top. As you walked into the house it felt inviting and cosy. Inside the house there was a lounge with yellow and grey sofas and a modern fireplace. The next room was the kitchen it had loads of counters and there was a breakfast bar type of thing. Upstairs there were six bedrooms and they all had different colours in. In Emily’s bedroom there was a double bed, a desk, a mirror and a closet. Emily lived with her mom [Sarah]her dad[carl] and her sister [Kayla.]

The next day, she heard an incredible announcement from the local news broadcast. Willy Wonka had decided to open his enormous   factory to three lucky children if they found a golden ticket hidden within the chocolate bars. If   only   Emily could get one. She energetically ran down stairs and called for her mom, “mommy I want a golden ticket, “ok sweetheart,” replied her mom.

Emily’s dad went to the shop and bought all the chocolate bars he could see and took them home. When he got home, Emily opened them all and the last one had a ticket inside. Seconds later, she revealed that her chocolate bar obtained a golden ticket and that she was on her way to Willy Wonka’s factory.

The next day, Emily arrived at the factory and the noisy crowed bustled with excitement. It wasn’t long before Emily went through the door and was welcomed warmly by Mr Wonka in the entrance. Gathered around her were the other winners of the golden tickets Verruca Salt [a spoiled child] and Augustus Gloop [a very greedy child.]

Soon after, the group were led through a purple door that said on it CHOCOLATE ROOM. Inside the chocolate room there were peppermint candy canes, fluffy, pink marshmallows and a giant chocolate river. Amazed Emily walked over to a giant gobstopper and tried a bit” disgusting” She   said. She carried on looking round when she saw something that caught her eye………

Emily walked over to fluffy, colourful marshmallow and bit a bit off   even though her mom had told her not to eat anything unless she was told to. Then she started getting sticky all over then colourful what was happening to her. Mr Wonka had told the Oompa Loompas to take her to the de-stick room. Then the other Oompa Loompas started singing a song about Emily as you already guessed her mom was not impressed.

After there catchy tune, the Oompa Loompas surrounded the group.  Emily’s   parents who looked unimpressed at Mr Wonka who was really enjoying the performance. Soon after, Mr Wonka’s instructions, the Oompa Loompas led Emily and her mom through the purple door once again. Unfortunately, Emily left the factory with nothing to show from her visit. Her vanity had gotton the better of her. From now on she was a little bit more considerate towards others. She will have less attitude and wont always want everything she sees.

Later that day, Emily left the factory through the green, big courtyard and through the iron gates moving a tiny bit differently. Who can say whether she will ever be the same again?

Sebastian and the Chocolate Factory – by Harry

Sebastian was the most jealous and ignorant boy you will ever meet. Seb spent hours setting traps and steeling video games. He had always admired   how he looks and what he wore   . It took him three days to choose some close for bedtime   . He always admired his stripy, gleaming Jaguar by his side. He always wore thick    ,   diamond samurai  armour and thick, titanium samurai swords.

Seb’s house was on the border of   Athens    . just ahead   of the entrance   were six statues of dragons guarding the entrance door but it was hard to get to the door because… it floats   .    Inside the house   was a zoo library   ,   30 bedrooms , cellar  and spa room. It had thick diamond chandeliers, It also   has a virtual   reality room a learning room   it has four rockets   six boats and a Pokémon maker machine.

The next day   ,    Seb  heard an  incredible  announcement  from the local  news broadcast . Mr willy Wonka   had decided   to open   his   haunted   , mysterious  factory to three lucky , ordinary children  if they found a golden ticket  hidden within  his ordinary bar of chocolate  .IF only Seb could find one . he jumped on the chairlift and called   for dad. In the morning Seb climbed into   his Porsche    and   brought fifty million on his forty millionth he got one    all the rest he gave to his    Jaguar   .

The next morning  ,  Seb arrived at  the factory and the noisy   ,    bustling crowd  spun with excitement .  It wasn’t long   before Seb   went into    the factory   and was warmly welcomed by Mr Wonka in the entrance    . Gathered   around   Mr Wonka were   the   other   winners of   the golden tickets   .  Zhang Whang   and Lewis   Lettis   .

Soon after  , The group  were led through a wide , open door and into the Chocolate room  inside was incredible.  Even Zhang  dropped his video  game console and  stared  oh Lewis was  just playing with the… Chocolate Dragons. Inside  were beautiful meadows but  Seb is going to have a  shock     .  He pushed down a lock and instantly the  game of thrones dragon burst out of the bars and ate  Seb  and then he turned into a dragon  after they took him to the Childrenation machine   unfortunately Seb  left the  factory empty handed .

He returned to his Aztec house and who knows if hell ever be the same again.